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In the first stage of the process, clay is first dug out of the ground. These large chunks of clay are broken into pieces by a metal grid, then small pieces of clay spread through rollers. After that, the clay is mixed with sand and water, and the resulting mixture is either put in a mould or cut by a wire cutter to make well-shaped bricks. In the fiveth stage of the process, the bricks are dried for one or two days. The dried bricks are then heated in a kiln, first at a moderate temperature (200 to 980 degrees), then at a high temperature up to 1300 degrees and cooled down for two or three days. Finally, bricks are packaged and transported by a truck to different places.
In the
first
stage of the process,
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clay
is
first
dug out of the ground. These large chunks of
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clay
are broken
into pieces by a metal grid, then
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small
pieces of
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clay
spread through rollers. After that, the
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clay
is mixed
with sand and water, and the resulting mixture is either put in a
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mould
or
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cut
by a wire cutter to
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make
well-shaped
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bricks
. In the
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fiveth
stage of the process, the
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bricks
are dried
for one or two days. The dried
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bricks
are then heated in a kiln,
first
at a moderate temperature (200 to 980 degrees), then at a high temperature up to 1300 degrees and cooled down for two or three days.
Finally
,
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bricks
are packaged
and transported by a truck to
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different
places.
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IELTS essay process demonstrates how to make bricks

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
129 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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