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My free timei have many different hobbies and interests such as computer gaming cycling and painting but my favourite is ice hockey. Its a very popular sport in my home country of canada. I practise every saturday morning at out local sport centre with my team and we play matches onces a month. We love to win

My free timei have many different hobbies and interests such as computer gaming cycling and painting but my favourite is ice hockey. Its a very popular sport in my home country of canada. I practise every saturday morning at out local sport centre with my team and we play matches onces a month. We love to win kWdqe
i have many different hobbies and interests such as computer gaming cycling and painting but my favourite is ice hockey. Its a very popular sport in my home country of canada. I practise every saturday morning at out local sport centre with my team and we play matches onces a month. We love to win. i have many different hobbies and interests such as computer gaming cycling and painting but my favourite is ice hockey. Its a very popular sport in my home country of canada. I practise every saturday morning at out local sport centre with my team and we play matches onces a month. We love to win
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different
hobbies and interests such as computer gaming cycling and painting
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but
my
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favourite
is ice hockey.
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a
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very
popular
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sport
in my home country of
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canada
. I
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practise
every
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saturday
morning at out local
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sport
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centre
with my
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team and
we play matches
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onces
a month. We
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love
to win.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
hobbies and interests such as computer gaming cycling and painting
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
my
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
is ice hockey.
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Its
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
popular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sport
in my home country of
Possible spelling mistake found.
canada
. I
Possible spelling mistake. 'practise' is British English.
practise
every
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saturday
morning at out local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sport
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
with my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
team and
we play matches
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onces
a month. We
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love
to
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
win
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IELTS essay My free timei have many different hobbies and interests such as computer gaming cycling and painting but my favourite is ice hockey. Its a very popular sport in my home country of canada. I practise every saturday morning at out local sport centre with my team and we play matches onces a month. We love to win

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  American English
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109 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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