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procedur text about how to make sandwich

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First of all, we take a slice of bun, second stage we put lettuce, next we put a slice of salami, then another slice bun on the top, after that we can put slice of tomato as a garnish, after finishing we can eat it. Salami is our protein source, lettuce and tomato is fiber source, and bun is carbo source. A bun is a small, sometimes sweet, bread-based item or roll. Though they come in many shapes and sizes, they are most commonly hand-sized or smaller, with a round top and flat bottom. Buns are usually made from flour, sugar, milk, yeast and butter. A bun is a small, sometimes sweet, bread-based item or roll. Though they come in many shapes and sizes, they are most commonly hand-sized or smaller, with a round top and flat bottom. Buns are usually made from flour, sugar, milk, yeast and butter. A bun is a small, sometimes sweet, bread-based item or roll. Though they come in many shapes and sizes, they are most commonly hand-sized or smaller, with a round top and flat bottom. Buns are usually made from flour, sugar, milk, yeast and butter.
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, we take a
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, second stage we put lettuce,
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of salami, then another
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bun
on the
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, after that we can put
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of tomato as a garnish, after finishing we can eat it. Salami is our protein source, lettuce and tomato is fiber source, and
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bun
is
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source. A
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small
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sweet, bread-based item or roll. Though they
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many
shapes and sizes, they are most
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hand-sized or smaller, with a round
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top
and flat bottom.
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Buns
are
usually
made from flour, sugar, milk, yeast and butter. A
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bun
is a
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small
,
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sometimes
sweet, bread-based item or roll. Though they
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come
in
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many
shapes and sizes, they are most
commonly
hand-sized or smaller, with a round
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top
and flat bottom.
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Buns
are
usually
made from flour, sugar, milk, yeast and butter. A
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bun
is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
sweet, bread-based item or roll. Though they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
shapes and sizes, they are most
commonly
hand-sized or smaller, with a round
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top
and flat bottom.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Buns
are
usually
made from flour, sugar, milk, yeast and butter.
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IELTS essay procedur text about how to make sandwich

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
193 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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