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Sharing data is good or not. Discuss both view and give your opinion on it.

Sharing data is good or not. Discuss both view and give your opinion on it. XmWA

There is no doubt that sharing information for various research is common nowadays. However, some believe that it is acceptable to share data, while others believe to its contrary. I would argue in the favor of not giving all data for the research. Firstly, in now open and globalized society, sharing and transferring of relevant data is common. People often give permission to it because it helps in devising effective public policy by the government or its subsidiary agencies. For instance, Indian government often use our data for identifying the poor for allocating desired subsidy. This helps in reaching to subsidy for the target group and avoiding any illegal hoarding by sellers. However, i believe that not all information be given to authority. Information like daily hobbits, daily routine and even personal political preferences, could be misuse by the authority. Furthermore, it has been seen that during the election period, the political parties exploit such data in their own good and therefor, helping to generate a false narrative for election. In conclusion, although it is crucial to share data for the research purpose, but i strongly feel that a careful introspection be done by own side before allowing the company to get access our data, thus, saving our oneself from such exploitation at the time of election.

There is no doubt that sharing information for various research is common nowadays. However
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some
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data
, while others The usual collocation for "believe" is "in" not "to". Did you mean "believe in"?believe in
believe to
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data
 for the research. Firstly
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now
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data
 is common.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 give permission to it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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helps
 in devising effective public policy by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 or its subsidiary agencies. For instance
, Indian This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturestatisticsknowledgedossierevidencegoods
data
 for identifying the poor for allocating desired subsidy. This This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 in reaching to subsidy for the target group and avoiding any illegal hoarding by sellers.

However
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 believe that not all information be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to authority. Information like daily hobbits, daily routine and even personal political preferences, could be misuse by the authority. Furthermore
, it has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that during the election period, the political parties exploit such You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturestatisticsknowledgedossierevidencegoods
data
 in their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and therefor, helping to generate a false narrative for election.

In conclusion
, although it is crucial to share You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturestatisticsknowledgedossierevidencegoods
data
 for the research purpose, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
strongly
 feel that a careful introspection be done
 by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 side This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 allowing the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 access our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturestatisticsknowledgedossierevidencegoods
data
, thus
, saving our oneself from such exploitation at the time of election. 