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problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

problems people have when they go to live in other countries. 2aEAX
the bar char shows information about the problem people have when they go to live abroad In general, all age groups experience the same problems related to finances, healthcare issue and finhding school for children. The biggest problem for people aged 35-54 is sorting out healthcare, a problem experienced by 37 percent of people in this age group. it's also high in two groups left- peole aged 18-34 and people over 55, acounting for 32 percent and just over 35 percent, respectively. moreover, the middle age group have the most problem related to money, accounting for 35 percent. in comparison, the young age group and the older age group also have the problem in finances but the percentage is lower than the middle age group, with 33 percent and 28 percent. Finally, finding school for children becomes the biggest issue for the middle age group with nearly 18 percent. in contrast, people over 55 has the least problem about it, at 3 percent. And only 6 percent of people in the young group age group have this trouble. In conclusion, people aged 35-54 have to deal with the most problem. meanwhile, sorting out finances and sorting out healthcare are two difficult issue that large amount of peole in this group have to face
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IELTS essay problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
212 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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