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Problems of middle eastern woman.

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I'm writing about the problems that may woman faces in our society. Firstly it should be noted that woman is according to our book must live in high quality life. Is this the most effective way? In this blog and video, I look at some research that’s been done about the best way to learn from your mistakes – and the answers may surprise you. Scroll down to find 3 examples of how I changed my students’ scores from Band 6 to Band 7.
I'm writing about the problems that
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may woman
faces in our society.
Firstly
it should
be noted
that woman is according to our book
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live
in high quality life. Is this the most effective way?

In this blog and video, I look at
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some
research that’s
been done
about the best way to learn from your mistakes
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–
and the answers may surprise you.

Scroll down to find 3 examples of how I
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changed
my students’ scores from Band 6 to Band 7.

IELTS essay Problems of middle eastern woman.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
84 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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