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Problems for Japan companies under CPTPP

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First, In CPTPP, Annex I and II, each CPTPP member state has some non-conforming measures that allow governments to maintain exceptions to the CPTPP services and investment chapters, transparently identifying measures, activities, or sectors where the chapters' obligations do not apply. As a result, you should pay close attention to the reservations mentioned. As an example: according to Annex II, Section 2 (Cross-Border Trade in Services and Investment), Singarpore reserves the right to maintain or adopt any measure affecting: “(a) the full or partial devolvement to the private sector of services provided in the exercise of governmental authority; (b) the divestment of its equity interests in, and/or the assets of, an enterprise that is wholly owned by the Singapore government; etc. ” Second, lack of ISDS experience: Japanese companies are hesitant to use arbitration, whether commercial or investment-related. So far, only three publicly known investor-state arbitration cases have been initiated by Japanese investors. As of today, all of the proceedings are still pending. Third, under pandemic, Australia, and Malaysia apply FDI restriction in some certain sectors but still 100% FDI friendly for manufacturing and most of the service industries. Especially, New Zealand government has introduced a temporary notification regime and announced that national interest test will temporarily apply to all foreign investments, regardless of dollar value, that result in more than a 25% ownership interest, or that increase an existing stake in a New Zealand asset to, or beyond, 50%, 75% or 100%. Once the temporary measures end, the minimum threshold for the national interest test will apply to transactions of $100 million or more (or higher if set by a trade agreement), as well as investments in sensitive land or fishing quota.
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, In
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CPTPP
, Annex I and II, each
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CPTPP
member state has
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non-conforming
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measures
that
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allow
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governments
to maintain exceptions to the
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CPTPP
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services
and
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investment
chapters,
transparently
identifying
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measures
, activities, or sectors where the chapters' obligations do not
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apply
.
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, you should pay close attention to the reservations mentioned. As an example: according to Annex II, Section 2 (Cross-Border Trade in
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Investment)
,
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Singarpore
reserves the right to maintain or adopt any
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measure
affecting: “(a) the full or partial
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devolvement
to the private sector of
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services
provided in the exercise of governmental authority; (b) the divestment of its equity
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interests
in, and/or the assets of, an enterprise
that is
wholly
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owned
by the Singapore
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government
; etc.
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experience: Japanese
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companies
are hesitant to
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arbitration, whether commercial or investment-related.
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far,
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only
three
publicly
known investor-state arbitration cases have
been initiated
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,
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proceedings are
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Third, under pandemic, Australia, and Malaysia
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apply
FDI restriction in
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some
certain sectors
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but
still
100% FDI friendly for manufacturing and most of the
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service
industries.
Especially
, New Zealand
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government
has introduced a temporary notification regime and announced that national
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interest
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test
will
temporarily
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apply
to all foreign
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investments
, regardless of dollar value, that result in more than a 25% ownership
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interest
, or that increase an existing stake in a New Zealand asset to, or beyond, 50%, 75% or 100%. Once the temporary
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measures
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end
, the minimum threshold for the national
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interest
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test
will
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apply
to transactions of $100 million or more (or higher if set by a trade agreement),
as well
as
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investments
in sensitive land or fishing quota.
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IELTS essay Problems for Japan companies under CPTPP

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