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Essay. In today’s modern life where new technologies are done for people’s need, in spite of tremendous number of sport halls setendary lifestyle is achieving famous fashion life. There numerous problems and certain measures to be taken to resolve them. One of the biggest problem is incorrect way of eating such as mankind are always eating fast foods. To solve this problem, to government could impose a higher tax of this kind of foods, which would people cannot eat this kind of foods. Another issue is now days people are not diet so people are getting fat. Therefore people are going to go hospital with stomachache. This problem the government could addressed by impose tax for snack foods. Because this kind of foods are not cooked which would the piece of rising this kind of food. In the result of this motion any people cannot eat these foods. Another problem is the people who do not go to sport halls and do not morning exercises. These days there are many setendary habits in our daily life. Because these days people are always inventing many machines. So robots and machines like vacuum cleaner have work all day. Therefore people are always sleeping or watch TV when they have got free time. The way forward should be to doing all works by people. Habits are not getting fat. To sum up above given problem and their solution. In spite a large number of sport halls a setendary lifestyle is obtaining famous in the contemporary world. Once someone is overweigh, they should them about eating to live, but not living to eat.
Essay.

In
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today
’s modern life where new technologies
are done
for
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people’s
need,
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in spite of
tremendous number of sport halls
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setendary
lifestyle is achieving
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famous
fashion life. There numerous
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problems
and certain measures to
be taken
to resolve them.

One of the biggest
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problem
is
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incorrect
way of eating such as mankind are always eating
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fast
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foods
. To solve this
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problem
, to
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government
could impose a higher tax of this
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kind
of
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foods
, which would
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people
cannot eat this
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kind
of foods.

Another issue is
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now
days
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people
are not diet
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so
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people
are getting
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fat
.
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Therefore
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people
are going to go hospital with stomachache. This
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problem
the
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government
could
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addressed
by impose tax for snack
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foods
.
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Because
this
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kind
of
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foods
are not cooked which would the piece of rising this
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kind
of
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food
. In the result of this motion any
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people
cannot eat these foods.

Another
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problem
is the
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people
who do not go to sport halls and do not morning exercises. These days there are
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many
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setendary
habits in our daily life.
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Because
these days
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people
are always inventing
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many
machines.
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So
robots and machines like vacuum cleaner have work all day.
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Therefore
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people
are always sleeping or
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watch
TV when they have
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got
free time. The way forward should be to doing all works by
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people
. Habits are not getting
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fat
.

To sum up above
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given
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problem
and their solution. In spite
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a large number of
sport halls a
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setendary
lifestyle is obtaining
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famous
in the contemporary world. Once someone is
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overweigh
, they should them about eating to
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live
,
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but
not living to eat.
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IELTS essay problem and solution essay

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
269 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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