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Prison is the most common way in most countries to solve problem however the most effective solution is to provide education to solve problem do youagree or disagree

Prison is the most common way in most countries to solve problem however the most effective solution is to provide education to solve problem do youagree or disagree aO0V
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that they will not again and it will have impact on passive criminal who are
also
thinking of doing this will be aware in advance of the bed consequence they need to face.

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rate is
effectively
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doers open behind the bars is that it cease the interaction with their fellow member or any other
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partner will crate safety among the citizen of the country.
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IELTS essay Prison is the most common way in most countries to solve problem however the most effective solution is to provide education to solve problem do youagree or disagree

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
193 words
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