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Pressure on school and university students in increasing and student pushed to hardwork when they young,why is it so?Do you agree with it?

Pressure on school and university students in increasing and student pushed to hardwork when they young, why is it so? Do you agree with it? 6N3wW
Study is most mandatary factor of everyones life to have a better career in their future. In the school and university teachers hardly try to make pressure on pupils they do more hardwork for better future. This essay tend to delve consequences why they try to make pressure in forthcoming paragraph. Pressure is that type of thing which helps everyones to do better by doing hard work where as education it also play an important role in everyones life. Firstly pressure are make on students by school and university to get a success.
Study is most
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factor of
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everyones
life to have a better career in their future. In the school and university teachers hardly try to
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make
pressure on pupils they do more
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hardwork
for better future.
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This essay tend
to delve consequences why they try to
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make
pressure in forthcoming paragraph.

Pressure is that type of thing which
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helps
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everyones
to do better by doing
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hard
work
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where as
education it
also
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play
an
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important
role in
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everyones
life.
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pressure are
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make
on students by school and university to
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get
a success.

IELTS essay Pressure on school and university students in increasing and student pushed to hardwork when they young, why is it so? Do you agree with it?

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  American English
2 paragraphs
93 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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