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"prevention is better than cure". Researching and treating a disease is costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measure to what extent you agree

"prevention is better than cure". Researching and treating a disease is costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measure to what extent you agree WagD
Investment in treatment has become expensive therefore, many people would suggest that researches should spend time in making prevention of diseases rather than treatment. However, I believe that a cure for any disease will be better than just having preventive technique for the disease. Finding a cure for any disease would be more effective than just having prevention. Medication for any ailment would help bring confidence among people. Recently, we saw with covid-19 even though, people were taking precautions there was rise in cases of covid-19 cases. People with different diseases would always want to be cured rather than just take prevention. On any given day people with serious medical condition would like doctors or researches to find complete cure of the diseases. For example, any cancer patient will always have a doubt in mind even after chemotherapy. However, there are certain conditions in which finding the cure is difficult. In such cases prevention is the last resort, but it does not mean that we not look for cure. In conditions like HIV cure has not been found yet, so people have to take preventions as a measure from getting into contact with the virus. To conclude, I would always want to see a cure for any aliment rather than just having preventive measures. I hope we will be successful in finding the cure for most of the disease in near future. As long as, we strive to find the cure preventing any disease will be the only option.
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therefore
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many
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people
would suggest that researches should spend time in making
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prevention
of
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diseases
rather
than treatment.
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, I believe that a
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cure
for any
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disease
will be better than
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just
having preventive technique for the disease.

Finding a
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cure
for any
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disease
would be more effective than
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just
having
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prevention
. Medication for any ailment would
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help
bring confidence among
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people
. Recently, we
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saw
with
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covid-19
even though
,
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people
were taking precautions there was rise in cases of
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covid-19
cases.

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with
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diseases
would always want to
be cured
rather
than
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just
take
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prevention
. On any
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given
day
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people
with serious medical condition would like doctors or researches to find complete
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cure
of the
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diseases
.
For example
, any cancer patient will always have a doubt in mind even after chemotherapy.

However
, there are certain conditions in which finding the
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cure
is difficult. In such cases
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prevention
is the last resort,
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but
it does not mean that we not look for
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cure
. In conditions like HIV
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cure
has not
been found
yet
,
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people
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preventions
as a measure from getting into contact with the virus.

To conclude
, I would always want to
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see
a
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cure
for any aliment
rather
than
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just
having preventive measures. I hope we will be successful in finding the
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cure
for most of the
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disease
in near future. As long as, we strive to find the
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cure
preventing any
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disease
will be the
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only
option.
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IELTS essay "prevention is better than cure". Researching and treating a disease is costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measure to what extent you agree

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
249 words
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