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Preserving by the internet

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Due to the drastic development of human-being civilization, in the 21st-century fourth industrial revorevolution, the existence of various means of technological devices have been making substantial contributions to the entire department in daily life. Markedly, the concrete evidence for this claim is the conversion of forms storing the information. In this day and age, books have been racdically superseded by the Internet when it comes to knowledge storage.
Due to the drastic development of human-being civilization, in the 21st-century fourth industrial
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revorevolution
, the existence of various means of technological devices have been making substantial contributions to the entire department in daily life.
Markedly
, the concrete evidence for this claim is the conversion of forms storing the information. In this day and age, books have been
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racdically
superseded by the Internet when it
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comes
to knowledge storage.
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IELTS essay Preserving by the internet

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68 words
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