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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic: News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

In this modern era of advanced communications, news has become one of the most strongest influencers of world. The entire process of news telecast and publications are now controlled by news editors, who decide what people should know and what they should not. This essay will articulate some of the factors influencing the news editors' decisions and also discuss the importance of revealing more good news to public rather than continously discussing about the negative news. There are two major factors influencing the decisions of news editors: political pressure and corporate favoritism. Firstly, lot of news editors are forced to publish one sided news due to the enormous pressure imposed by political parties. For instance, in India which is one the largest democracies of the world, lot of news channels and newspapers are run by political parties to propogate their own agenda. Secondly, most of the corporate companies started their own news divisions and they are seeing newschannels and newspapers as their profit making business. This will automatically push the news editors of their companies to write in favour of them. Nowadays, negative news such as murders, terrorist attacks are trending across the length and breadth of the world. People tend to be attracted more towards the bad news and started ignoring the positive news. For instance, one the international news forum stated that the circulation of newspapers and television watching rates will see a huge spike, whenever some negative incidents happens like airforce attacks, plane crashes etc. Also, most of the doctors are stating that children and general public will have a stable mental health, if they are surrounded by good vibes and postive news. In my opinion, people should always be exposed to more postive news rather than spreading more negative news. This will make boost the morale of people and push them towards a more healthier life. This essay has articulated the two major factors of news editor's decisions: political pressure and corporate favoritism. I strongly believe, people should be intentionally exposed to more and more postive news as human minds are tend be be attracted to negative news easily. It is in the hands of news editors, who decide which news should be telecated and published irrespective of any external factors. To conclude, let us all make the world, a peaceful and better place for living with lot of good and postive vibes.
In this modern era of advanced communications,
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news
has become one of the
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most strongest
influencers of
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world
. The entire process of
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news
telecast and publications are
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now
controlled by
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news
editors, who decide what
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people
should know and what they should not. This essay will articulate
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some of the
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factors
influencing the
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news
editors' decisions and
also
discuss the importance of revealing more
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good
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news
to public
rather
than
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continously
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discussing about the
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negative
news.

There are two major
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factors
influencing the decisions of
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news
editors: political pressure and corporate favoritism.
Firstly
,
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lot of
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news
editors
are forced
to publish one sided
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news
due to the enormous pressure imposed by political parties.
For instance
, in India which is
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one
the largest democracies of the
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world
, lot of
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news
channels and newspapers
are run
by political parties to
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propogate
their
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own
agenda.
Secondly
, most of the corporate
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companies
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started
their
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own
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news
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divisions and
they are seeing
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newschannels
and newspapers as their profit making business. This will
automatically
push the
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news
editors of their
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companies
to write in
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favour
of them.

Nowadays,
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negative
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news
such as murders, terrorist attacks are trending across the length and breadth of the
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world
.
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People
tend to
be attracted
more towards the
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bad
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news
and
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started
ignoring the
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positive
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news
.
For instance
, one the international
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news
forum stated that the circulation of newspapers and television watching rates will
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see
a huge spike, whenever
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some
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negative
incidents happens like
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airforce
attacks,
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plane
crashes etc.
Also
, most of the doctors are stating that children and
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general public
will have a stable mental health, if they
are surrounded
by
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good
vibes and
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postive
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news
. In my opinion,
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people
should always
be exposed
to more
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postive
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news
rather
than spreading more
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negative
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news
. This will
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make
boost the morale of
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people
and push them towards a
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more healthier
life.

This essay has articulated the two major
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factors
of
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news
editor's decisions: political pressure and corporate favoritism. I
strongly
believe,
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people
should be
intentionally
exposed to more and more
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postive
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news
as human minds are
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tend
be
be attracted
to
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negative
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news
easily
. It is in the hands of
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news
editors, who decide which
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news
should be
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telecated
and published irrespective of any external
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factors
.
To conclude
,
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let
us all
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make
the
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world
, a peaceful and better place for living with
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lot of
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good
and
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postive
vibes.
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IELTS essay Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic: News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
397 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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