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preparing for a special occasion.

preparing for a special occasion. Ermx
Muslim people celebrate two Eids every year. One of them is Eid al-Fitr. This Eid begins when astronomy experts see hilal on the last day of Ramadan and it takes place on Shawal for three days. Each and every Individual fasting waits for this day curiously. We are as Muslims interested in this occasion and prepare well for it because it is a command from Allah. To get ready for this occasion, we have to do some basic things. Before some days of this Islamic occasion, we go shopping. We buy new clothes for the oldest and children. Also, we buy some decorations, balloons, gifts, and candies. Besides, we have to prepare for Zakat al-Fitr. It is a specific amount of money which is given to the poor and every Muslim has to pay it. In addition to that, we are used to cleaning our houses before this day and decorating them. We as Muslims perform an important prayer and other Sunan on this day. It considers the Sunnah of the Prophet Mohammed and it is called Eid al-Fitr prayer. It begins after sunrise for about a quarter of an hour and it consists of two rakats where the imam and worshipers say seven takbeerat in the first rak’ah, and in the second they say five takbeerat, Allah is the greatest. There are other Sunan that we do for more deeds such as taking shower, putting on perfume before going to pray, well dressed, eating before going to pray and going to the mosque from a particular road, and returning from a different road. In the afternoon, families gather and visit each other. Some families love inviting their relatives, close friends, and neighbors for lunch. We are used to preparing spacious and delicious tables and dessert dishes. The most common dessert is Eastern such as Konafa, Baklava, and Basbousa. During this day, we exchange congratulations and blessings. We say “Happy Eid Al Fitr to you and your family’’, “May Allah accepts our good deeds Happy Eid ”, “Every year you are in a good health ”, and so on. On this religious occasion, all Muslims are so thrilled. Because of these family gatherings and completing the fasting worship. They gain deeds to revive this day and help the poor by giving them money, Zakat Al Fitr. Preparing for this day requires a bit of effort, however, we enjoy doing that.
Muslim
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celebrate two
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Eids
every year. One of them is
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Eid
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al-Fitr
. This
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Eid
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begins
when astronomy experts
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see
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hilal
on the last day of Ramadan and it takes place on
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Shawal
for three days. Each and every Individual fasting waits for this day
curiously
. We are as Muslims interested in this
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occasion
and prepare well for it
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because
it is a command from Allah.

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get
ready for this
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occasion
, we
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have to
do
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some
basic things.
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Before
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some
days of this Islamic
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occasion
, we go shopping. We
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buy
new clothes for the oldest and children.
Also
, we
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buy
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some
decorations, balloons, gifts, and candies.
Besides
, we
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have to
prepare for
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Zakat
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al-Fitr
. It is a specific amount of money which is
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given
to the poor and every Muslim
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has to
pay it.
In addition
to that, we are
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used
to cleaning our
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houses
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before
this day and decorating them.

We as Muslims perform an
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important
prayer and other
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Sunan
on this day. It considers the
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Sunnah
of the Prophet Mohammed and it
is called
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Eid
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al-Fitr
prayer. It
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begins
after sunrise for about a quarter of an hour and it consists of two
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rakats
where the imam and worshipers say seven
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takbeerat
in the
first
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rak
’ah, and in the second they say five
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takbeerat
, Allah is the greatest. There are other
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Sunan
that we do for more deeds such as taking shower, putting on perfume
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before
going to pray,
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well dressed
, eating
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before
going to pray and going to the mosque from a particular road, and returning from a
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different
road.

In the afternoon,
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families
gather and visit each other.
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Some
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families
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love
inviting their relatives, close friends, and neighbors for lunch. We are
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used
to preparing spacious and delicious tables and dessert dishes. The most common dessert is Eastern such as
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Konafa
, Baklava, and
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Basbousa
. During this day, we exchange congratulations and blessings. We say “Happy
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Eid
Al
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Fitr
to you and your
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family’’
, “May Allah accepts our
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good
deeds Happy
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Eid
”, “Every year you are in a
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good
health ”, and
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so
on.

On this religious
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occasion
, all Muslims are
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so
thrilled.
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Because
of these
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family
gatherings and completing the fasting worship. They gain deeds to revive this day and
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help
the poor by giving them money,
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Zakat
Al
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Fitr
. Preparing for this day requires a bit of effort,
however
, we enjoy doing that.
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IELTS essay preparing for a special occasion.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
400 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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