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preparing cherry jam from picking cherries to cooking and packaging

preparing cherry jam from picking cherries to cooking and packaging N3nnN

This text is about preparing cherry jam from picking cherries to cooking and packaging we have nine stages in the process At the begining we have to get the cherries from the tree and transporting whit a special car and washing the cheries and removing the stems and taking the stons and cooking the jam First of all a sheet is spread on the ground and the tree is shaken to get the cherries. Then the cherries are collected and are taken to the processing plant. Next the leaves and stems are removed and the cherries are washed then the stone is taken out of middel of the cherias and Pour them into a large bowl and add sugar and lemon To cook well and become a jam. After all of them the qualiti of jam is checked and if the quality is good it is ready to go to jars Finally a label is stuck on the jars so they are ready to sale I think it is important to do the sterile preparation steps anf of course the taste of jam is very imortant too And if both of these things are observed, it will definitely be a popular jam

This text is about preparing cherry jam from picking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
 to cooking and packaging we have nine stages in the process

At the Possible spelling mistake found.beginning
begining
 we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
 from the tree and transporting whit a special car and washing the Possible spelling mistake found.cherriesCherie
cheries
 and removing the stems and taking the Possible spelling mistake found.sonsstonestonesstopstonsStone
stons
 and cooking the jam

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
 a sheet is spread
 on the ground and the tree is shaken
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
. Then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are collected
 and are taken
 to the processing plant. Next
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 and stems are removed
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are washed
 then the stone is taken
 out of Possible spelling mistake found.middlemidden
middel
 of the Possible spelling mistake found.whereasChrisclericscherriescherishCherie
cherias
 and Pour them into a large bowl and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 sugar and lemon To cook well and become a jam.

After all
 of them the Possible spelling mistake found.quality
qualiti
 of jam is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 and if the quality is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 it is ready to go to jars

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 a label is stuck
 on the jars This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they are ready to sale

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to do the sterile preparation steps Possible spelling mistake found.ANFandananyAFAna
anf
of course
 the taste of jam is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
Possible spelling mistake found.important
imortant
 too

And if both of these things are observed
, it will definitely be a popular jam