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practice test9-q1-3rd attempt What area do you enjoy visiting most in your hometown? Why do you enjoy this location? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v.1

practice test9-q1-3rd attempt What area do you enjoy visiting most in your hometown? Why do you enjoy this location? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 1
Going out for dinner or lunch is an increasingly popular trend in many countries. Food chains are increasing with the every passing day and it is readily available in the market 24/7, while some people think it is a blessing in this fast paced world, others believe it has potential health risks. In my opinion, it causes more health issues than providing facility to human beings. To begin with, availability of different cuisines is blessing for many people. Especially for those who are working away from home and living alone in another city or they don’t have time to cook due to their hectic professional routine. However, they can choose from a list of restaurants who even provide free delivery to their homes. In-addition to that, because of increasing competition in the market, it is also observed that this commercial arrangement is not expensive in comparisons to home-made food, as these food chains frequently offer deals. Therefore, people choose this food over homemade food and spend time either relaxing or doing other chores. On the contrary, although, it is a convenience and entertainment now a days, but most people's belief, it is not good for personal well-being at all. It is causing a lot of diseases in which high blood pressure and diabetes are on the top of the list. One of the recent studies in Pakistan suggests that these restaurants use substandard oil, high quantity of spices and sugar to develop a taste in their meals which is not only unhealthy but also create a craving after a certain time. For instance, I personally lived away from my home town for a longer period of time and I usually cook my meal by myself. Therefore, it is recommended by the doctors to have simple and healthy homemade food or streamed vegetable to stay healthy. In conclusion, this food is beneficial in time saving and it is trending in this modern age. Pleasure of outing and food in restaurant, once a month is acceptable, but it is absolutely imperative that regular meals will destroy health.
Going out for dinner or lunch is an
increasingly
popular trend in
many
countries.
Food
chains are increasing with the every passing day and it is
readily
available in the market 24/7, while
some
people
think
it is a blessing in this
fast
paced world, others believe it has potential health
risks
. In my opinion, it causes more health issues than providing facility to human beings.

To
begin
with, availability of
different
cuisines is blessing for
many
people
.
Especially
for those who are working away from home and living alone in another
city or
they don’t have
time
to cook due to their hectic professional routine.
However
, they can choose from a list of restaurants who even provide free delivery to their homes. In-addition to that,
because
of increasing competition in the market, it is
also
observed that this commercial arrangement is not expensive in comparisons to home-made
food
, as these
food
chains
frequently
offer deals.
Therefore
,
people
choose this
food
over homemade
food
and spend
time
either relaxing or doing other chores.

On the contrary
, although, it is a convenience and entertainment
now a days
,
but
most
people
's belief, it is not
good
for personal well-being at all. It is causing
a lot of
diseases in which high blood pressure and diabetes are on the top of the list. One of the recent studies in Pakistan suggests that these restaurants
use
substandard oil, high quantity of spices and sugar to develop a taste in their meals which is not
only
unhealthy
but
also
create a craving after a certain
time
.
For instance
, I
personally
lived
away from my home town for a longer period of
time
and I
usually
cook my meal by myself.
Therefore
, it
is recommended
by the doctors to have simple and healthy homemade
food
or streamed vegetable to stay healthy.

In conclusion
, this
food
is beneficial in
time
saving and it is trending in this modern age. Pleasure of outing and
food
in restaurant, once a month is acceptable,
but
it is
absolutely
imperative that regular meals will
destroy
health.
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IELTS essay practice test9-q1-3rd attempt What area do you enjoy visiting most in your hometown? Why do you enjoy this location? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
345 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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