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plastics causes and solution

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Nowadays, our environment suffers from plastic packaging and plastic bags, plastic does a great damage to the planet. In this essay, the actions how to solve the plastic problem will be mentioned and what can be done to lower the use of plastic packaging will be discussed. Firstly, plastic products are thrown under the ground, so that it is able to cause ground pollution, the soil becomes poor. It is one of the reasons why trees and plants do not grow as they used to fifty years ago. Secondly, production of plastic causes air pollution. Factories that produce plastic bags, packaging and other plastic products emmit exhaust fumes to the atmosphere. All of the facts mentioned can prove that plastic pollution plays the leading role in the list of environmental problems. What pollution abutement can be done to lower the risk of earth damaging? First. plastic bags can be changed to bags made of natural materials like clothes of wood. To realize this, factories should lower the production of plastic bags and change them to more natural products. Moreover, the problem of ground pollution because of plastic production should be discussed in social media to let people know the scope of plastic problem. Second, already used plastic can be recycled in other products. There is a Russian program of recycling plastic into T-shirts, caps and even balls for football and basketball. In conclusion, I would like to say that, nowadays, people appear as the main reason of environmental problems, the manufacturing of plastic products increases the risk of the further earth life. Everything should be done to lower the risk of destroying the planet.
Nowadays, our environment suffers from
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packaging and
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,
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does
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a great damage
to the planet. In this essay, the actions how to solve the
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problem
will
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and what can
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to lower the
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use
of
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packaging will
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.

Firstly
,
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products
are thrown
under the ground,
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so
that it is able to cause ground
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pollution
, the soil becomes poor. It is one of the reasons why trees and plants do not grow as they
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used
to fifty years ago.
Secondly
, production of
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plastic
causes air
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pollution
. Factories that produce
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plastic
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bags
, packaging and other
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products
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emmit
exhaust fumes to the atmosphere.
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All of the
facts mentioned can prove that
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pollution
plays the leading role in the list of environmental problems.

What
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abutement
can
be done
to lower the
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risk
of earth damaging?
First
.
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plastic
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bags
can be
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changed
to
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made of natural materials like clothes of wood. To realize this, factories should lower the production of
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plastic
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bags
and
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change
them to more natural
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products
.
Moreover
, the
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problem
of ground
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pollution
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because
of
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production should
be discussed
in social media to
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let
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people
know the scope of
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plastic
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problem
. Second, already
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used
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plastic
can
be recycled
in other
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products
. There is a Russian program of recycling
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plastic
into T-shirts, caps and even balls for football and basketball.

In conclusion
, I would like to say that, nowadays,
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people
appear as the main reason of environmental
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problems
, the manufacturing of
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plastic
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products
increases the
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risk
of the
further


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earth
life. Everything should
be done
to lower the
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risk
of destroying the planet.
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IELTS essay plastics causes and solution

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
274 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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