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Show people how cacao is made

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Chocolate is no doubt one of the most favorite food worldwide. The popularity of chocolate mostly because of its sweet and biter favors, both packed in each bite, which is widely accepted and loved by most. Because of its demand, farmers and companies have join hands to change and perfect the production of cacao beans, which later turned into chocolate and other cacao's based ingredients and foods. The production of one of the most favorite ingredient-cacao- is compose of many steps and procedures, which require carefulness and needs to be in great considerations over the steps. The cacao is contained in pods, which can only be harvested when they ripe red. One of the reasons cacao is expensive is because the cacao's trees can only be grown in only a few places in the world. The three main places which are suitable to grown in large quantities are south america, africa and indonesia.

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