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positive effects of science on the food we eat

positive effects of science on the food we eat OERJd
As we know, the field of science is very broad and has many branches especially those that discuss about our daily lives. For example, the evolution of science over the past few years are very important and make a huge contribution to the food we eat and in the recent years, information in food such as preservatives, genetically modified food or artificial flavouring has become more and more common.
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a huge contribution to the food we eat and in the recent years, information in food such as preservatives,
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IELTS essay positive effects of science on the food we eat

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1 paragraphs
69 words
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