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accepting bad situations like unsatisfactory job or fixed amount of money

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Life is unpredictable as many people find it difficult whereas some believe that finding the solutions to avoid or improvement can be done for worse scenarios of life. In this essay, We are going to discuss the different types mentality of people to deal with situations. There are many things that can bring up bad situation like job with no satisfaction, no or even lack of money. firstly people think that it is good to adjust with it because it may take some time to make everything better. As a result, most of human being are in wrong profession, where they are not able to improve or gain knowledge just because of monetary benefits it lead toward productivity of employee and at end they ended up loosing interest in jobs or being salaried employee with particular company. On other hand people are like to take up fight and try to overcame with finding suitable jobs with same or more than previous salary where they can gain valuable experience with joy and happiness which encourage them towards more work productivity and result may be promoted in early stage. Furthermore, As money play vital role in high profile life, it is important to have plenty of money. With no money or shortage of it may rise different problems like food shortage, poor education and hustle life. People always think about product price before purchasing, and they become master with their adjustment toward their daily necessities. Action toward to improve it can bring good life with the help of many facilities such as education from well-known institutions, reputation in society with help of this can be popular. As conclusion, mu opinion is quite different as people lost their hopes before taking step ahead and try to remain in current position however, finding better option can help to build better positive attitude toward life.
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people
find it difficult whereas
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some
believe that finding the solutions to avoid or improvement can
be done
for worse scenarios of
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life
. In this essay, We are going to discuss the
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mentality of
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to deal with situations.

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many
things that can bring up
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bad
situation like job with no satisfaction,
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no
or even lack of
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money
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firstly
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people
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good
to adjust with it
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because
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everything better.
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wrong
profession, where they are not able to
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improve
or gain knowledge
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because
of monetary benefits it
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toward productivity of employee and at
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end
they ended up loosing interest in jobs or
being salaried
employee with particular
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company
. On other hand
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people
are like to take up fight and try to
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overcame
with finding suitable jobs with same or more than previous salary where they can gain valuable experience with joy and happiness which encourage them towards more work productivity and result may
be promoted
in early stage.

Furthermore
, As
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money
play vital role in high profile
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life
, it is
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important
to have
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plenty
of
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money
. With no
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money
or shortage of it may rise
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problems like food shortage, poor education and hustle
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life
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always
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about product price
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before
purchasing, and they become master with their adjustment toward their daily necessities. Action toward to
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improve
it can bring
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good
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life
with the
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of
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many
facilities such as education from well-known institutions, reputation in society with
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help
of this can be popular.

As conclusion, mu opinion is quite
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as
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people
lost their hopes
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before
taking step ahead and try to remain in
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current
position
however
, finding better option can
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help
to build better
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attitude toward
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IELTS essay accepting bad situations like unsatisfactory job or fixed amount of money

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
5.5
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