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Positive and negative sides of watching TV

Positive and negative sides of watching TV M03a
We live in an age when many of us are watching TV but watching TV has their own advantages and disadvantages. This essay deals positive and negative sides of watching TV. It is divided into three sections and deals with advantages and disadvantages. It will continue to discuss both sides of watching TV. Finally, some conclusions will be drawn. Many people watch TV to find out news and what is happening in the world and many of us don't know that watching TV has many disadvantages. Here are some negative sides of watching TV. When you watch TV close to TV you spoil your eyesight. Additionally, you will need a doctor because you will have problems with your eyes. Furthermore, people have become addicted to watching TV. Let's turn to positive sides of watching TV now. When you watch useful channels you can learn something new and something new can help you in your life for studying or working. Also, you can learn a foreign language when you watch films or TV series. It is important to realize that it is good idea to watch TV a little bit in a day but it is bad when you watch it all day. I think it is good to watch TV when you want to learn something new and just to relax. To draw the conclusion, I personally believe that watching TV is good in nice intentions. But you shouldn't watch TV a long time. After all, as shown above, you may make your own opinion. You can decide for yourself what is better to do and how to spend your time instead of watching TV.
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live
in an age when
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many
of us are watching TV
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watching TV has their
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advantages and disadvantages. This essay deals
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positive
and
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negative
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sides
of watching TV. It
is divided
into three sections and deals with advantages and disadvantages. It will continue to discuss both
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sides
of watching TV.
Finally
,
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some
conclusions will
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.

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people
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watch
TV to find out
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news
and what is happening in the world and
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many
of us don't know that watching TV has
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many
disadvantages. Here are
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some
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negative
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sides
of watching TV.
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When
you
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TV close to TV you spoil your eyesight.
Additionally
, you will need a doctor
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because
you will have problems with your eyes.
Furthermore
,
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people
have become addicted to watching TV.

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Let
's turn to
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positive
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sides
of watching TV
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now
. When you
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watch
useful channels you can learn something
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new
and something
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new
can
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help
you in your life for studying or working.
Also
, you can learn a foreign language when you
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watch
films or TV series. It is
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important
to realize that it is
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good
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idea
to
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TV a
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little bit
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but
it is
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bad
when you
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watch
it all day. I
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think
it is
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good
to
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watch
TV when you want to learn something
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new
and
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just
to relax.

To draw the conclusion, I
personally
believe that watching TV is
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good
in nice intentions.
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But
you shouldn't
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watch
TV a long time.
After all
, as shown above, you may
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make
your
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own
opinion. You can decide for yourself what is better to do and how to spend your time
instead
of watching TV.
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IELTS essay Positive and negative sides of watching TV

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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