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1) I’m going to talk about an Iranian dish called filled fish. It’s originally from north of Iran. We fill fish with some special ingredients like fish egg, walnuts, pepper, and some aromatic herbs. Then, we fry it. It’s so tasty. 2) I think it’s popular in my country because first of all north of Iran is one of the destinations that is mostly visited and also it is the home of fish. Due to these facts most people have tried it and it seems that they like it. 3) I’m really interested in seafood and fish is one of them. As I said before, it’s so delicious. Ikm mad about its texture, it’s crispy and spicy. 4) I suppose most people tried fried fish, but filled fish is totally different. The things that filled with it has an awesome taste and make it different. If a visitor likes fish and spicy, I highly recommend filled fish
1) I’m going to talk about an Iranian dish called
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filled
fish. It’s
originally
from north of Iran. We fill fish with
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some
special ingredients like fish egg, walnuts, pepper, and
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some
aromatic herbs. Then, we fry it. It’s
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so
tasty.

2) I
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think
it’s popular in my country
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because
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first of all
north of Iran is one of the destinations
that is
mostly
visited and
also
it is the home of fish. Due to these facts most
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people
have tried it and it seems that they like it.

3) I’m
really
interested in seafood and fish is one of them. As I said
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before
, it’s
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so
delicious.
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Ikm
mad about its texture, it’s crispy and spicy.

4) I suppose most
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people
tried fried fish,
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but
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filled
fish is
totally
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different
. The things that
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filled
with it has an awesome taste and
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make
it
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different
. If a visitor likes fish and spicy, I
highly
recommend
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filled
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fish

IELTS essay popular food in your country

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
156 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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