In the past few decades, we can see that international sporting events like the Olympics and other sports events encourage world peace and ease tensions in a safe way. Others argue that these events can lead to rivalry and emotional temperament that can lead to violence between countries. In my view, I partially agree that global events encourage sportsmanship, but do not encourage global unity.
Firstly, it is true that world cup events are used as a tool to show cast patriotic feelings in safe and secure ways; however, no matter the disputes between the countries, the athletes try to outperform each other in a friendly environment to spread the true spirit of the game. In addition, gatherings like the football matches is a platform for different people to interact and share experiences and love against each other. For instance, many experts seemed that contests are the best platform to show supremacy in violent free outcomes. Needless to say, global events encourage to ease international tension.
Secondly, although the tournaments positively affect world peace, sometimes the athletes get carried away and end up hurting each other on or off the field. Moreover, pressure situation may make the spectators fight for their team and can lead to law and order problem. For example, cricket world cup matches between rivalry countries like India and Pakistan matches most of the times led to violence in the audience. Hence, international events have their pitfalls and they cannot encourage global peace at all times.
In conclusion, we can clearly understand despite the drawbacks sports events are the only best occasion to release international tensions in a friendly atmosphere and encourage friendship at all time.
In the past few decades, we can
see
that
international
sporting
events
like the Olympics and
other
sports
events
encourage
world
peace and
ease
tensions
in a safe way
. Others argue that these
events
can lead to rivalry and emotional temperament that can lead to violence between countries. In my view, I
partially
agree
that
global
events
encourage
sportsmanship,
but
do not
encourage
global
unity.
Firstly
, it is true that
world
cup
events
are
used
as a tool to
show
cast patriotic feelings in safe and secure ways;
however
, no matter the disputes between the countries, the athletes try to outperform each
other
in a friendly environment to spread the true spirit of the game.
In addition
, gatherings like the football matches is a platform for
different
people
to interact and share experiences and
love
against each
other
.
For instance
,
many
experts seemed that contests are the best platform to
show
supremacy in violent free outcomes. Needless to say,
global
events
encourage
to
ease
international
tension.
Secondly
, although the tournaments
positively
affect
world
peace,
sometimes
the athletes
get
carried away and
end
up hurting each
other
on or off the field.
Moreover
, pressure situation may
make
the spectators fight for their team and can lead to law and order problem.
For example
, cricket
world
cup matches between rivalry countries like India and Pakistan matches
most of the times
led to violence in the audience.
Hence
,
international
events
have their
pitfalls and
they cannot
encourage
global
peace at all times.
In conclusion
, we can
clearly
understand despite the drawbacks sports
events
are the
only
best occasion to release
international
tensions in a friendly atmosphere and
encourage
friendship at all time.
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