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poplar hobbies and interests changes over times AND MORE A REFLECTIONS of trends.

poplar hobbies and interests changes over times AND MORE A REFLECTIONS of trends. E7e1B
one of the most, interesting things that maximum people do in their leisure time is a hobbies activity. I firmly agree with above statements and lets disccuss all the oints in the upcoming paragraphs. perhaps, the hobby can build their mind and goes deep in their intrests. To begin with, on one other hand the hobbies are getting changes as per like the trends and fashions. Highest number of people changes their hobbies to flaunt for other persons. most of the people, follow their unlikeable activities that to show that they exists and doing the latest trends. But actually in the reality trhere are nothing much. In fact, they didn't follow their passions doing it.
one
of the most, interesting things that maximum
people
do in their leisure time is a
hobbies
activity. I
firmly
agree
with above statements and
lets
disccuss
all the
oints
in the upcoming paragraphs.
perhaps
, the
hobby
can build their mind and goes deep in their
intrests
. To
begin
with, on one other hand the
hobbies
are getting
changes
as per
like
the trends and fashions.
Highest
number of
people
changes
their
hobbies
to flaunt for other persons.
most
of the
people
, follow their
unlikeable
activities that to
show
that they
exists
and doing the latest trends.
But
actually in the reality
trhere
are nothing much. In fact, they didn't follow their passions doing it.
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IELTS essay poplar hobbies and interests changes over times AND MORE A REFLECTIONS of trends.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
115 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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