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If you had a chance to make a change to your school, what would you do to make it better place for you and your schoolmates

If you had a chance to make a change to your school, what would you do to make it better place for you and your schoolmates mXeY1
If I have the opportunity to change my school, I will contribute to the realization of the industry's common goals, improve the quality of teaching and learning, and accelerate the emulation movement "Building a friendly school. ", positive students ”we need to have a breakthrough in how to think and how to do it. I will continue to promote class decoration, create a friendly learning environment. Promote student-centered teaching. Create a friendly learning environment in teaching and education to attract students actively and actively participate in learning and training. Creating opportunities for students to explore and explore by themselves. Teachers need to perform their role just as mentors, organize activities, help and support them in learning so that students can promote their activeness, initiative and creativity in activities. study.
If I have the opportunity to
change
my school, I will contribute to the realization of the industry's common goals,
improve
the quality of teaching and
learning
, and accelerate the emulation movement
"
Building a friendly school.
"
,
positive
students
”we
need to have a breakthrough in how to
think
and how to do it. I will continue to promote
class
decoration, create a friendly
learning
environment. Promote student-centered teaching. Create a friendly
learning
environment in teaching and education to attract
students
actively
and
actively
participate in
learning
and training. Creating opportunities for
students
to explore and explore by themselves. Teachers need to perform their role
just
as mentors, organize activities,
help
and support them in
learning
so
that
students
can promote their activeness, initiative and creativity in activities.
study
.
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IELTS essay If you had a chance to make a change to your school, what would you do to make it better place for you and your schoolmates

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
129 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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