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Pollution is increasing day by day. What are the problems and consequences of it?

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In this cutting edge era, pollution is a major concern on the earth as the pollution is rapidly increasing day by day dot however, there are various reasons of increasing pollution such as global warming, increase in population and many more as wll as there are number of consequences about which I will circulate in the forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with the reason of this statement that there is a rapid growth in population Predominantly, major factor of enhancement in pollution is that vehicles are increasing day by day. In other words, the population is increasing rapidly by which individuals buy various types of vehicles for their convenience as vehicle emits smoke which cause air pollution. Moreover, in this contemporary era there is increasing industries by which the industries pollute the water and air in such a way, industries put the waste in water and emit the various gases in the air. Apart from this, individuals burn the crackers on festival, special occasions and many more by which crackers create noise pollution and air pollution add this is the major reason of increasing pollution. Moving further to the consequences of the pollution. First of all, pollution is very dangerous for the human as it cause various health problems. To be more precise, pollution is increasing rapidly by which there is increase in cardiovascular diseases which can enhance did death rate in economy by which the economy is imbalanced of country. Moreover, the number of accidents are increased as the air pollution caused less visibility by which the accident are increased. Additionally pollution can create disturbance in marine life as the industries put the waste in water by which water is polluted and create disturbance in marine life. To conclude, indeed the notion that pollution is increasing rapidly and there are various reasons of increasing pollution such as increase in number of vehicles and burning crackers by individuals. Moreover, there are some consequences of pollution like it create cause various health problems as well as increasing the number of accidents.
In this cutting edge era,
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pollution
is a major concern on the earth as the
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pollution
is
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rapidly
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increasing
day by day dot
however
, there are
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various
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reasons
of
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increasing
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pollution
such as global warming, increase in population and
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many
more
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as
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wll
as there are
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number
of
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consequences about
which I will circulate in the forthcoming paragraphs.

To commence with the
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reason
of this statement that there is a rapid growth in population
Predominantly
, major factor of enhancement in
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pollution
is that
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vehicles
are
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increasing
day by day.
In other words
, the population is
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increasing
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rapidly
by which individuals
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buy
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various
types of
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vehicles
for their convenience as
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vehicle
emits smoke which cause
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air
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pollution
.
Moreover
, in this contemporary era there is
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increasing
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industries
by which the
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industries
pollute the
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water
and
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air
in such a way,
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industries
put the waste in
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water
and emit the
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various
gases in the
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air
. Apart from this, individuals burn the crackers on festival, special occasions and
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many
more by which crackers
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create
noise
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pollution
and
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air
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pollution
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add
this is the major
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reason
of
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increasing
pollution.

Moving
further
to the consequences of the
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pollution
.
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First of all
,
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pollution
is
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very
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dangerous
for the human as it cause
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various
health problems. To be more precise,
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pollution
is
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increasing
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rapidly
by which there is increase in cardiovascular diseases which can enhance did death rate in economy by which the economy
is imbalanced
of country.
Moreover
, the
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number
of accidents
are increased
as the
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air
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pollution
caused less visibility by which the accident
are increased
.
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Additionally
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pollution
can
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create
disturbance in marine life as the
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industries
put the waste in
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water
by which
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water
is polluted
and
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create
disturbance in marine life.

To conclude
,
indeed
the notion that
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pollution
is
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increasing
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rapidly
and there are
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various
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reasons
of
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increasing
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pollution
such as increase in
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number
of
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vehicles
and burning crackers by individuals.
Moreover
, there are
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some
consequences of
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pollution
like it
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create
cause
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various
health problems
as well
as
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increasing
the
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number
of accidents.
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IELTS essay Pollution is increasing day by day. What are the problems and consequences of it?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
339 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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