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About my field of academic study

About my field of academic study L3aP6
I'm an auditor who lives in Tehran, that's the capital of Iran, i currently living with my parents in their house. I'm 28 years old and and lately i got this feeling that last six seven years of my life was nothing but an absolute nightmare. I don't know what should i begin with. . . so i was preparing myself for academic test for a admission to collage and it was pretty good until i got accepted to Kharazmi university, it's name changed from Tarbiat moalem to that, and i had such a tough time in there beacause of all the time wasting, hard exams that sometimes were impossible to get pass and. . . made it really uncomfortable situation for me until i decided to change my field of study and look for different one anyway i ended up in accounting.
I'm an auditor who
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lives
in Tehran, that's the capital of Iran,
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i
currently
living with my parents in their
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house
. I'm 28 years
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old
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and and
lately
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i
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got
this feeling that last six seven years of my life was nothing
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but
an absolute nightmare.
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I
don't know what should
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i
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begin
with.
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.
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.
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so
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i
was preparing myself for academic
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test
for
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a
admission to collage and it was pretty
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good
until
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i
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got
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accepted
to
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Kharazmi
university, it's name
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changed
from
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Tarbiat
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moalem
to that, and
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i
had such a tough time in there
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beacause
of all the
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time wasting
,
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hard
exams that
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sometimes
were impossible to
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get
pass and.
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.
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.
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made
it
really
uncomfortable situation for me until
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i
decided to
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change
my field of study and look for
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different
one anyway
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i
ended up in accounting.

IELTS essay About my field of academic study

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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