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About my field of academic study

About my field of academic study L3aP6

I'm an auditor who lives in Tehran, that's the capital of Iran, i currently living with my parents in their house. I'm 28 years old and and lately i got this feeling that last six seven years of my life was nothing but an absolute nightmare. I don't know what should i begin with. . . so i was preparing myself for academic test for a admission to collage and it was pretty good until i got accepted to Kharazmi university, it's name changed from Tarbiat moalem to that, and i had such a tough time in there beacause of all the time wasting, hard exams that sometimes were impossible to get pass and. . . made it really uncomfortable situation for me until i decided to change my field of study and look for different one anyway i ended up in accounting.

I'm an auditor who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 in Tehran, that's the capital of Iran, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
currently
 living with my parents in their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. I'm 28 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
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and and
 lately Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 this feeling that last six seven years of my life was nothing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 an absolute nightmare. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 don't know what should Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
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begin
 with. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 was preparing myself for academic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 for Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 admission to collage and it was pretty This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 until Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 to Possible spelling mistake found.Khwarizmi
Kharazmi
 university, it's name This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 from Possible spelling mistake found.Lariat
Tarbiat
Possible spelling mistake found.malemalesSalemmoraleMalemodem
moalem
 to that, and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 had such a tough time in there Possible spelling mistake found.because
beacause
 of all the This word is normally spelled with hyphen.time-wasting
time wasting
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 exams that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 were impossible to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 pass and. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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Don't put a space before the full stop.
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This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMade
made
 it really
 uncomfortable situation for me until Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 my field of study and look for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 one anyway Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 ended up in accounting. 