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Plays and dramas in school has to be implemented or not

Plays and dramas in school has to be implemented or not R08PY
Humans have different interest in the field of study, since every human dont have equal capabilities and skills. so, having dramas and work theaters in school enhances their ability and perform well in their life. Despite this, people still are not clear whether it has to be implemented in school or not. In this essay I will be giving my opinion if these old age plays and dramas has to be implemented in school or not. Firstly, having such plays and dramas in school makes sutdent happy and their way of learning process also changes. It can also be said that, such course in school enhances the abilities of students where they can show thier abilities in front of mass. Such as if a student cannot do well in his study he at least earn for his living by showing his way of performance. Eventually this would lead for future development. Along with this, its dark side has yet to be discussed. Most of the students who goes to school having a big dream in future with education may be distracted from their aim. They may focus on dramas rather than education. As, education is one of the most important in human life. Example: A student may have aim to be a doctor but what if he never attend his regular class and goes for work threater. Thus, having such classes diverts a student from his carrer. Concluding the fact, it can be said that having such dramas and plays in school for student must be in proper or scheduled time. If such things are introduced in school at proper schedule it enhances the ability of him or her and can make his future better.
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dont
have equal capabilities and
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skills
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so
,
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having
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dramas
and work theaters in
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school
enhances their
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ability
and perform well in their life. Despite this,
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people
still
are not
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clear
whether it
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has to
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school
or not. In this essay I will be giving my opinion if these
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old
age plays and
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dramas
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has to
be implemented
in
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school
or not.

Firstly
,
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having
such plays and
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dramas
in
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school
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makes
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sutdent
happy and their way of learning process
also
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changes
. It can
also
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that, such course in
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school
enhances the
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abilities
of
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students
where they can
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show
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thier
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abilities
in front of mass. Such as if a
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student
cannot do well in his study he at least earn for his living by showing his way of performance.
Eventually
this would lead for future development.

Along with this, its dark side has
yet
to
be discussed
. Most of the
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students
who goes to
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school
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having
a
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big
dream in future with education may
be distracted
from their aim. They may focus on
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dramas
rather
than education.
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, education is one of the most
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important
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student
may have aim to be a doctor
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but
what if he never
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threater
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Thus
,
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such classes diverts a
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student
from his
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carrer
.

Concluding the fact, it can
be said
that
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having
such
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dramas
and plays in
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school
for
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student
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must
be in proper or scheduled time. If such things
are introduced
in
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school
at proper schedule it enhances the
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ability
of him or her and can
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make
his future better.
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IELTS essay Plays and dramas in school has to be implemented or not

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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