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Plan A below shows a health center in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in 2011( present day). (CR-Consulting Room). compare and make a report on this.

Plan A below shows a health center in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in 2011( present day). (CR-Consulting Room). compare and make a report on this. m1oPK

Task -1 The presented plans show changes in health centre over six years from 2005 to 2011. Overall, the facilities of health centre were enhanced in 2011 as compared to 2005. It is clearly observed from the plans that garden remained same in both pictures. In 2005, no building was noted near to pysiotherapy room on left side, But in 2011, minor operation room was built next to physiotherapy room. Entrance to reception was on south side in 2005 and it exchanged to south- west in 2011. Car parking space was rised from 12 to 30 in the final year. Moreover, variations in reception desk design noted in both plans. Vertical design was presented in 2005 and horizontal lay out was at the end of the year and few seats were added to it. Children play area was constructed near to entrance in 2011. Office stayed same in both images whereas its space was reduced in 2011. 4 consulting rooms were seen in last plan. CR3 shifted from left to right in 2011. CR1 and CR2 were on right side in 2005 and it moved to south side in final year. Also, new consulting room was accommodate above CR3 in 2011.

Task -1

The presented You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plans
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in health Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 over six years from 2005 to 2011.

Overall
, the facilities of health Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
were enhanced
 in 2011 as compared to 2005.

It is clearly
 observed from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plans
 that garden remained same in both pictures. In 2005, no building was noted
 near to Possible spelling mistake found.physiotherapy
pysiotherapy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 in 2011, minor operation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
was built
next
 to physiotherapy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. Entrance to reception was on south side in 2005 and it exchanged to south- west in 2011. Car parking space was Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "rose", the past tense form of the verb 'rise'?roseraisedriserisenrisesrisked
rised
 from 12 to 30 in the final year.

Moreover
, variations in reception desk design noted in both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plans
. Vertical design was presented
 in 2005 and horizontal lay out was at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the year and few seats were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to it. Children play area was constructed
 near to entrance in 2011. Office stayed same in both images whereas its space was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 in 2011. 4 consulting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
 were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plan
. CR3 shifted from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 to right in 2011. CR1 and CR2 were on right side in 2005 and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to south side in final year. Also
, new consulting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 was Consider using a past participle here: "accommodated".accommodated
accommodate
 above CR3 in 2011. 