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Places of interest in my city

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Dear Emma, It's great to hear that you will have a trip to Vietnam and visit my city. As you know, Buon Ma Thuot is a coffee capital, a city full of sunshine and wind, so you will surely have many interesting experiences when coming here. I hope some of my suggestions will help you on this journey. The first place I want to mention is the Don village eco-tourism area, one of the most famous tourist destinations. In here you can enjoy local dishes such as Lam rice, grilled chicken and participate in some interesting, unique activities such as going to the suspension bridge, riding elephants, . . . The second place I is Trung Nguyen coffee village. This is considered as one of the symbols of Vietnamese coffee. When you come here you can learn many new things, from the production of coffee to distinguishing different types of beans. And more than that, coffee lovers will definitely need to come here, not only to enjoy coffee but also to have many new experiences. The third place is also the last place I would like to introduce, which is Ea Kao Lake. Unlike the previous two places, in here you will be able to enjoy the peaceful natural scenery along with the fresh and cool air. What is more wonderful than when we can admire the view of Ea Kao Lake at dawn while sipping a cup of Trung Nguyen coffee? There are many other places you can visit but I hope that with my recommendations you will have many memorable experiences in Buon Ma Thuot. Looking forward to see you soon! Best wishes, Uyen
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IELTS essay Places of interest in my city

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275 words
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