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Modern science has the power to combat with all diseases but some people face difficulty to taking care of most elderly people what are the reasons

Modern science has the power to combat with all diseases but some people face difficulty to taking care of most elderly people what are the reasons mXb98

New technologies and science has the ability to fight with the diseases but it may be affect the young generation because the burden they will get which leads to sacrifices in their own life Elderly people are good for those, in some house's they have not much time to take care of their child the. Elderly people can easily handle all the situations. However, if we talk about aged people, if they catch diseases like heart failure or kidney transplant then the whole burden will go to their younger one's, although it is natural to live life with as God created us. Apart from that, if people don't get retirements at their scheduled time it leads up to unemployment, there are no vacancies will be available for today's generation. To sum up,

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but
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because
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get
 which leads to sacrifices in their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 life

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people
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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people
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However
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, if they catch diseases like heart failure or kidney transplant then the whole burden will go to their younger one's, although it is natural to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 life with as God created us. Apart from that, if You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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get
 retirements at their scheduled time it leads up to unemployment, there are no vacancies will be available for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
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To sum up, 