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pictures are more effective that words. BM019
Pictures about news stories are commonly used on TV and in newspapers. Some people belive that this changing is more effective than words. I agree with this opinion because pictures are more attractive, and can draw a larger range of attractions. A successful picture advtisment can efficiently draw more attentions in public. For saying that, pictures could be colourful and more visualising, which for many people, pictures are more interesting than words. For example, travellors do not have the time stay at the train station for long. Instead of some dry words commercial, some attractive pictures can easily be noticed and remembered while people pop on and off the train. Another reason that pictures are more advantagous is when the audience do not know how to read words. In supermarket, some toy packs do not have words due to the group of people intent to perchase them have not got the ability to read words yet. Therefore, if the toy pack with more words on, less attraction from the target customer is an obvious outcome. In conclution, interesting pictures are more successful in commercial than words, also when come to some specific clients, picture are more useful. So that, I am at the side of many people who think using pictures instead of words in advertisement is better.
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Pictures
about news stories are
commonly
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used
on TV and in newspapers.
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Some
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people
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belive
that this changing is more effective than words. I
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agree
with this opinion
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because
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pictures
are more attractive,

and can draw a larger range of attractions.

A successful
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picture
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advtisment
can
efficiently
draw more attentions in public. For saying that,
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pictures
could be
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colourful
and more
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visualising
, which for
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many
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people
,
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pictures
are more interesting than words.
For example
,
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travellors
do not have the time stay at the train station for long.
Instead
of
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some
dry words commercial,
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some
attractive
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pictures
can
easily
be noticed
and remembered while
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people
pop on and off the train.

Another reason that
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pictures
are more
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advantagous
is when the audience do not know how to read words. In supermarket,
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some
toy packs do not have words due to the group of
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people
intent to
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perchase
them have not
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got
the ability to read words
yet
.
Therefore
, if the toy pack with more words on, less attraction from the target customer is an obvious outcome.

In
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conclution
, interesting
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pictures
are more successful in commercial than words,
also
when
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come
to
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some
specific clients,
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picture
are more useful.
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So
that, I am at the side of
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many
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people
who
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think
using
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pictures
instead
of words in advertisement is better.
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IELTS essay pictures are more effective that words.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
218 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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