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Physical exercise is vital part of life for healthy lifestyle. Most of the people are busy with their daily routine life work. Besides, they haven’t enough time to do physical exercise and it leads to chronic diseases. But there are also have some another causes like development of technology and effect of social networking websites First of all world getting modern and bring some impediment about healthy lifestyle. Youngsters have no interest in sports, they prefer to spend time with video games, on social websites and ints. Another most popular reason is people can’t deal with heavy and stressfull

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IELTS essay Physical exercise is vital p

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