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Photograph to keeps your memories

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I became passionate about photography when I was about 10 years old. My father bought a DSLR camera to take plenty of photos. He took such really nice pictures that astonished me so I asked him to teach me how to photograph like that. I found I was really addicted to photography. I was able to capture moments from my superb perspective. When I visited Japan 3 years ago, my father allowed me to use his camera instead of my phone to get better pictures and all of my family members trusted me to take pictures of them. During the pandemic of COVID-19, I don’t get a chance to photograph so I look back at the pictures I took. They bring me back to such treasured moments I was experiencing. Photographs have the incredible power to make me feel happy, excited, and peaceful. I'd recommend it as a hobby because for me it’s one of the most creative activities that you can express your feelings.

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