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: RECENTLY, WE HAVE TO DO AND LEARN EVERYTHING ONLINE BECAUSE OF COVID-19. WHAT ARE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF IT? WRITE AN ESSAY ABOUT 200-250 WORDS TO DISCUSS ABOUT THAT.

: RECENTLY, WE HAVE TO DO AND LEARN EVERYTHING ONLINE BECAUSE OF COVID-19. WHAT ARE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF IT? WRITE AN ESSAY ABOUT 200-250 WORDS TO DISCUSS ABOUT THAT. ok2ND
Recently, we are facing with an enormous epidemic of human history Covid-19. We ought to keep distance, and maybe we have to isolate. Thus, instead of going out to meet each other, we must do everything online. Not only brings disadvantages, online also brings countless benefits that we do not expect. As a person who have to learn online, I realized some benefits of it such as saving moving expensive; flexibility in terms of time and place to study or working; Reduce stress. Instead of going out, we just need to find the most comfort place in our house to work or study effectly. Therefore, learning or working online surely can help us saving moving expensive and a little money is could use for another purpose. The second advantage is flexibility in terms of time and place. It resembles to you have ability to control your time because you do not ought to reserve time for traffic jam, spending more time to eat breakfast or take care your family. If you work as businessman, you must pay a large of money per month for hire good places. In the contrary, if you online business, you do not have to pay one. The last advantage is reducing stress. When you work at home, if you get burn out inasmuch amount of work, you also can take a short rest. In the contrary, it seems like more difficult if you work at organ. On the other hand, working or learning online also have disadvantage such as solve problems yourself; less of relationships; reduces communication and enthusiasm. It is difficult for person who have tendency to work in groups because they must solve all problems by themselve. Working at home also affect our relationships. Due to the fact, we can meet each other and we can not momently use social media evenly. Therefore, we get gap between relationship. For study at home, it makes student feel less communicate and enthusiastic. When study at school, they have more activity instead of merely sit alone and focus on the screen. How bored it is. Taking everything into consideration, working and learning online have both advantages and disadvantages. I think after Covid-19, we must have numerous considerable memories and technology may develop more and more to serve people.
Recently, we are facing with an enormous epidemic of human history Covid-19. We ought to
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keep
distance, and maybe we
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have to
isolate.
Thus
,
instead
of going out to
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meet
each other, we
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must
do everything
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online
. Not
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only
brings disadvantages,
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online
also
brings countless benefits that we do not
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expect
.

As a person who
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have to
learn
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online
, I realized
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some
benefits of it such as saving moving expensive; flexibility in terms of
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time
and
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place
to
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study
or
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working
;
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Reduce
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stress
.
Instead
of going out, we
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just
need to find the most comfort
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place
in our
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house
to
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work
or
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study
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effectly
.
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, learning or
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working
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online
surely
can
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help
us
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saving
moving expensive and a
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little
money
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is
could
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use
for another purpose. The second advantage is flexibility in terms of
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time
and
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place
. It resembles to you have ability to control your
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time
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because
you do not ought to reserve
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time
for traffic jam, spending more
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time
to eat breakfast or take care your family. If you
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work
as businessman, you
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must
pay a large of money per month for hire
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good
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places
. In the contrary, if you
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online
business, you do not
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have to
pay one. The last advantage is reducing
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stress
. When you
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work
at home, if you
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get
burn out inasmuch amount of
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work
, you
also
can take a short rest. In the contrary, it seems like more difficult if you
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work
at organ.

On the other hand
,
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working
or learning
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online
also
have disadvantage such as solve problems yourself; less of relationships;
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reduces
communication and enthusiasm. It is difficult for person who have tendency to
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work
in groups
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because
they
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must
solve all problems by
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at home
also
affect our relationships. Due to the fact, we can
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momently
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social media
evenly
.
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, we
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get
gap between relationship. For
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study
at home, it
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makes
student feel less communicate and enthusiastic. When
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study
at school, they have more activity
instead
of
merely
sit alone and focus on the screen. How bored it is.

Taking everything into consideration,
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working
and learning
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
have both advantages and disadvantages. I
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think
after Covid-19, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
have numerous considerable memories and technology may develop more and more to serve
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people
.
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IELTS essay : RECENTLY, WE HAVE TO DO AND LEARN EVERYTHING ONLINE BECAUSE OF COVID-19. WHAT ARE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF IT? WRITE AN ESSAY ABOUT 200-250 WORDS TO DISCUSS ABOUT THAT.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
382 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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