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pharmacology is the branch of medicine and biology concerned with the study of drug action.

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is the branch of medicine and biology concerned with the study of drug action.
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worried or nervous feeling about
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something
, or
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something
that
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makes
you feel worried:

Concern for the safety of the two missing
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teenagers
is growing.

There's
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a lot of
public concern about/over
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dangerous
toxins recently found in food.
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IELTS essay pharmacology is the branch of medicine and biology concerned with the study of drug action.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
91 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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