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personal happiness comes from being successful in life .how far do you agree with this statement

personal happiness comes from being successful in life. how far ENpeB

Secondly, having more money can help people plan for the future so they have more control over their lives. I admit that saving money helps people to become more independent in life because they will not need financial assistance when they are old. Moreover, they can plan for things like their children's education so that their children can have a better future or buying a bigger house. People with less money, on the other hand, are unable to plan for the future, which makes it much more difficult, in my opinion.

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people
 plan for the future This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they have more control over their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
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. I admit that saving money This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
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people
 to become more independent in life This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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 they will not need financial assistance when they are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. Moreover
, they can plan for things like their children's education This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that their children can have a better future or buying a bigger This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 with less money, on the other hand
, are unable to plan for the future, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
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 it much more difficult, in my opinion. 