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What are the causes of water shortage ? how should the nature resources be preserved and utilitied.

What are the causes of water shortage? how should the nature resources be preserved and utilitied. pJLga
The problem of water shortage which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is hazardous while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the shortage of water as a natural resource is a great problem. There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact is that over population leads to migration and urbanisation which results in creating imbalance and scarcity of resources. Another v pivotal aspect is that mixture of pollution causes global warming which leads to natural disasters like floods, drought and under such conditions there is no water. Hence, it is apparent that water shortage is a global threat. Steps to deal with this problem are many but the most significant ones are not complicated but acceptable and practical. Besides this, there should be recycling of water and even rain water harvesting is very helpful in storing fresh water. primarily, afforestation reduce pollution and maintain water cycles. Moreover, strict laws should be made against pollution. To recapitulation, according to the arguments aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the problem of water crisis can be successful addressed.
The problem of
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shortage which was always debatable has
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now
become more controversial with
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many
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claiming that it is hazardous while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the shortage of
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water
as a natural resource is a great problem.

There are myriad of reasons which will
further
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explain
this argument
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the most preponderant one stems from the fact is that over population leads to migration and
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urbanisation
which results in creating imbalance and scarcity of resources. Another v pivotal aspect is that mixture of pollution causes global warming which leads to natural disasters like floods, drought and under such conditions there is no
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water
.
Hence
, it is apparent that
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shortage is a global threat.

Steps to deal with this problem are
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many
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but
the most significant ones are not complicated
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but
acceptable and practical.
Besides
this, there should be recycling of
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and even rain
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water
harvesting is
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very
helpful in storing fresh
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water
.
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primarily
, afforestation
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reduce
pollution and maintain
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water
cycles.
Moreover
, strict laws should
be made
against pollution. To recapitulation, according to the arguments aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the problem of
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water
crisis can be successful addressed.
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IELTS essay What are the causes of water shortage? how should the nature resources be preserved and utilitied.

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