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Percentage of first-year students enrolled in remedial education courses at two different universities.

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The given bar graph provides information about the percentages of students enrolled in remedial education courses at two universities. The units of measurement are in percentages. Overall, what stands out from the bar graph is that All Remedial Classes are the most popular course are chosen by most students at both universities. Furthermore, it seems university A is more popular than University B. Looking into details, Remedial Classes tie at the lowest spot with nearly 21% at University A as opposed to University B with around 11%. Remedial Writing and Remedial Math are in the same popularity among the students at University B with approximately 9%. Also, they are the least chosen courses by students at University B. Looking at University A the percentages of enrollment in Remedial Writing and Remedial Math are respectively about 26% and exactly 35%. Finally, All Remedial Classes receive the highest percentage of enrollment with 45 % at University A whilst it is nearly 13% at University B.
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. The units of measurement are in percentages.

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Remedial
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B with around 11%.
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Remedial
Writing and
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Remedial
Math are in the same popularity among the
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University
B with approximately 9%.
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B. Looking at
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Remedial
Writing and
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Math are
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IELTS essay Percentage of first-year students enrolled in remedial education courses at two different universities.

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