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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People who cannot accept criticism will not succeed working in teams

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Ubdoubtedly, success is a vital aim in every body's lilfe. We try in our life to learn more skills and attempt to apply them alongside our life to achieve our goals. While some people think that they could live better in a criticism free environment, others disagree. In my opinion, criticism can be useful in our life trajectory to reach our objective with more successful rate. In what follows, i delve into my notable reasons. To begin with, no body is perfect, and we need to improve our attitude, knowledge, and abilities to succeed in our personal and professional life. Knowing our weakness is first step in this process which end up attempting to work hard to achieve better abilities. How to know about our skills which we need to improve? Listenning to other people's honestly critics is one of the straightforward and easiest way to get familliar with them. Therefore, paying attention to others comments, help us improve our aptitiude with more work. For instance, when I was student in the university, I had a very loyal friend, who talked frankly and even he found something to say something about me, he honestly speak his mind and crirticed me. At first, I did not like this behavior, but after listenning to his comment, gradually I found that his comment showed some of points in my personality through improving them I could get stronger skills specially in English speaking skills. Had not listen to my friend critics, I would not have those strong skills in pronaunciation and intonation in speaking English language. Furthermore, listening to other people critics provides us a golden opportunity to broden our horizon through a very good brain storming process. In a professional way of thinking about any issue, brain storming, through which we can expand our idea and thoughs, we increase our chance to find the best way of reaching success. In the second step listen to our critics about ideas and filtring impractical and unsiutable ones help us narrow down the way to success. In this step we should listen to our colleagues critics and this is a critical and bottleneck step. If people know how to bear othres critics, they will more likely to find the best road to be successful. In a very famous book about strategic way of thinking to success, I read about the principal imporrtnce of ability of listening to other people critics as a basic needed skill to get success. In general, I strongly believe that ability of tolerating other people critics is integral to get success. This is because listenning to critics expose us to our weakness, which is necessary if we want to improve our ability, and because this ability provid folks an opportunity to find more options of approach to think about a question and find its answer.
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Ubdoubtedly
,
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success
is a vital aim in every body's
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lilfe
. We try in our
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life
to learn more
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skills
and attempt to apply them alongside our
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life
to achieve our goals. While
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some
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people
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think
that they could
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live
better in a criticism free environment, others disagree. In my opinion, criticism can be useful in our
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life
trajectory to reach our objective with more successful rate. In what follows,
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i
delve into my notable reasons.

To
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begin
with,
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no body
is perfect, and we need to
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improve
our attitude, knowledge, and
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abilities
to succeed in our personal and professional
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life
. Knowing our weakness is
first
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step
in this process which
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end
up attempting to work
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hard
to achieve better
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abilities
. How to know about our
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skills
which we need to
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improve
?
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Listenning
to
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other
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people
's
honestly
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critics
is one of the straightforward and easiest way to
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get
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familliar
with them.
Therefore
, paying attention to others comments,
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help
us
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improve
our
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aptitiude
with more work.
For instance
, when I was student in the university, I had a
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very
loyal friend, who talked
frankly
and even he found something to say something about me, he
honestly
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speak
his mind and
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crirticed
me. At
first
, I did not like this behavior,
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but
after
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listenning
to his comment,
gradually
I found that his comment
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showed
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some of points
in my personality through improving them I could
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get
stronger
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skills
specially
in
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English speaking
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skills
. Had not
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listen
to my friend
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critics
, I would not have those strong
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skills
in
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pronaunciation
and intonation in speaking English language.

Furthermore
, listening to
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other
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people
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critics
provides us a golden opportunity to
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broden
our horizon through a
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very
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good
brain storming process.
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In a professional way
of thinking about any issue, brain storming, through which we can expand our
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idea
and
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thoughs
, we increase our chance to
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find
the best way of reaching
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success
. In the second
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step
listen to our
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critics
about
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ideas
and
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filtring
impractical and
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unsiutable
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ones
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help
us narrow down the way to
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success
.
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In
this
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step
we should listen to our colleagues
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critics
and this is a critical and bottleneck
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step
. If
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people
know how to bear
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othres
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critics
, they will more likely to
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find
the best road to be successful. In a
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very
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famous
book about strategic way of thinking to
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success
, I read about the principal
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imporrtnce
of
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ability
of listening to
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other
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people
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critics
as a basic needed
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skill
to
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get
success.

In general
, I
strongly
believe that
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ability
of tolerating
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other
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people
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critics
is integral to
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get
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success
. This is
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because
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listenning
to
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critics
expose us to our weakness, which is necessary if we want to
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improve
our
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ability
, and
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because
this
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ability
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provid
folks an opportunity to
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find
more options of approach to
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think
about a question and
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find
its answer.
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IELTS essay People who cannot accept criticism will not succeed working in teams

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
473 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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