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People who can not babies go for the option of adoption. Some people say that this could be encouraged and some oppose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People who can not babies go for the option of adoption. Some people say that this could be encouraged and some oppose. m20ed

Begetters who cannot have offsprings go for the option of adoption. An array of inhabitants believe that this could be positive practice. While, others discord with this statement. This essay will intend to analyse both side of views along with my perspective which inclines toward the former statement due to it is beneficial for parents as well as children and it Will continue legacy. To embark on, people should encourage parents for the adoption owing to fact that it is beneficial for both infants and begetters. Parents can get complete family. This means legacy of the family will continue for long time. For this reason, Children Can have secure future. Parents can teach their children about education, manners as well as moral values. For instance, BBC news conducted a survey, in 2015, vdaan organization, which is running in Mumbai. They take care of adoloscense. Consequently, people should motivate parents who cannot have babies. On the contrary, nowadays, there are innovation in technology. Begetters without blessings of having offsprings can contact these hospital, and Can have adopt babies from their own genes which, considered as their own blood. Moreover, it may cause discrimination later because certain situations become worse. Adopted children may face a plethora of challenges. It can lead to emotional and psychological issues. To recapitulate, certain individuals argue to adopt adoloscense due to it cause discrimination. However, I believe that it is a great way for parents and children. These children can make their life better as well as can get a happy family.

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offsprings
 go for the option of adoption. An array of inhabitants Possible agreement error. Did you mean "believes"? (Some collective nouns can be treated as both singular and plural, so 'believe' is not always incorrect.)believes
believe
 that this could be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 practice. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
, others discord with this statement. This essay will intend to Possible spelling mistake. 'analyse' is British English.analyze
analyse
 both side of views along with my perspective which inclines toward the former statement due to it is beneficial for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
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 and it Will continue legacy.

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people
 should encourage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 for the adoption owing to fact that it is beneficial for both infants and begetters. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
Parents
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 complete family. This means legacy of the family will continue for long time. For this reason
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Children
 Can have secure future. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
Parents
 can teach their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 about education, manners as well
 as moral values. For instance
, BBC news conducted a survey, in 2015, Possible spelling mistake found.vanDanDeandawnDawndean
vdaan
 organization, which is running in Mumbai. They take care of Possible spelling mistake found.adolescence
adoloscense
. Consequently
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 should motivate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 who cannot have babies.

On the contrary
, nowadays, there are innovation in technology. Begetters without blessings of having Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "offspring", the plural form of the noun 'offspring'?offspringoffspring scanoffspring canoff springs can
offsprings can
 contact Did you mean "this hospital" or "these hospitals"?this hospitalthese hospitals
these hospital
, and Can have Use past participle here: "adopted".adopted
adopt
 babies from their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 genes which, considered as their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 blood. Moreover
, it may cause discrimination later This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 certain situations become worse. Adopted You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 may face a plethora of challenges. It can lead to emotional and psychological issues.

To recapitulate, certain individuals argue to adopt Possible spelling mistake found.adolescence
adoloscense
 due to it cause discrimination. However
, I believe that it is a great way for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
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children
. These You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 their life better as well
 as can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a happy family. 