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influence of peers on youngers

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the impact of peers on youth has been an issue that has always been debated. scientific studies indicate that the pros and cons are very dependent on the personal character of each individual. but in most cases, the disadvantage of peers' influence has been more. the impact of peers on youth has been an issue that has always been debated. scientific studies indicate that the pros and cons are very dependent on the personal character of each individual. but in most cases, the disadvantage of peers' influence has been more.
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the
impact of peers on youth has been an issue that has always
been debated
.
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scientific
studies indicate that the pros and cons are
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very
dependent on the personal character of each individual.
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but
in most cases
, the disadvantage of peers' influence has been more.

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the
impact of peers on youth has been an issue that has always
been debated
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
scientific
studies indicate that the pros and cons are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
dependent on the personal character of each individual.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
but
in most cases
, the disadvantage of peers' influence has been more.
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IELTS essay influence of peers on youngers

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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