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influence of peers on youngers

influence of peers on youngers eRLDW

the impact of peers on youth has been an issue that has always been debated. scientific studies indicate that the pros and cons are very dependent on the personal character of each individual. but in most cases, the disadvantage of peers' influence has been more. the impact of peers on youth has been an issue that has always been debated. scientific studies indicate that the pros and cons are very dependent on the personal character of each individual. but in most cases, the disadvantage of peers' influence has been more.

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in most cases
, the disadvantage of peers' influence has been more.

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the
 impact of peers on youth has been an issue that has always been debated
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterScientific
scientific
 studies indicate that the pros and cons are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 dependent on the personal character of each individual. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBut
but
in most cases
, the disadvantage of peers' influence has been more. 

IELTS essay influence of peers on youngers

Essay

American English

2 paragraphs

90 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0

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