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For people who are, at least, interested it is effortless to search the networks and discover web pages containing articles judging (1). The one point of view believes that (2). The different opinion argues and considers (3) as the important option in that respect. A quantity of researchers have claimed that over the last decades there have been some changes in (4) tendencies. As a result, one situation seems to be becoming more and more common. Regardless of more than a few possible outcomes of that mainstream, it appears in fact that (5). Consequently, nobody can deny that it is particularly challenging to underestimate this in any way. However, this situation could raise some discussions among people who are convinced that (6). Even if social and economic proportions of effects are clear, they are closely consistent than other dimensions. It is often said that (7). Hence Otherwise, several challenges may occur. Still, it is important to take into account all the details of every specific situation. From mine point of view, the former judgment is definitely sound, as it follows from my own knowledge, for I am an a (8). Although, the most reasonable way is to steer a narrow middle course between the two viewpoints.
For
people
who are, at least, interested it is effortless to search the networks and discover web pages containing articles judging (1). The one point of view believes that (2). The
different
opinion argues and considers (3) as the
important
option in that respect.

A quantity of researchers have claimed that over the last decades there have been
some
changes
in (4) tendencies.
As a result
, one situation seems to be becoming more and more common. Regardless of more than a few possible outcomes of that mainstream, it appears in fact that (5).
Consequently
, nobody can deny that it is
particularly
challenging to underestimate this in any way.

However
, this situation could raise
some
discussions among
people
who
are convinced
that (6). Even if social and economic proportions of effects are
clear
, they are
closely
consistent
than other dimensions. It is
often
said that (7).
Hence
Otherwise
, several challenges may occur.
Still
, it is
important
to take into account all the
details
of every specific situation.

From mine point of view, the former judgment is definitely sound, as it follows from my
own
knowledge, for I am an a (8). Although, the most reasonable way is to steer a narrow middle course between the two viewpoints.
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Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
206 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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