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government spent there money on the railway

government spent there money on the railway 6aanK
introduction, most people say that government spent there money on the railway. i agree with the statement railway is a good for the future in our country, because most people go to there offices in every day early in the morning, due to triafic jame for small road and a lot of vehicle. so the train is very important in the country no more expenses same like the vehicle and train move more people to one place to another place easyle with out trafic jame its make strong economey of our countary.
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introduction
, most
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people
say that
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government
spent there money on the railway.
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i
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agree
with the statement railway is a
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good
for the future in our country,
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because
most
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people
There isn't usually a preposition before "there". Did you mean "go there"?
go to there
offices
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in every day
early in the morning, due to
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triafic
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jame
for
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small
road and
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a lot of vehicle
.
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so
the train is
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very
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important
in the country no more expenses same like the vehicle and train
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move
more
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people
to one place to another place
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easyle
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with out
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trafic
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jame
its
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make
strong
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economey
of our
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countary
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IELTS essay government spent there money on the railway

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
92 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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