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government spent there money on the railway

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introduction, most people say that government spent there money on the railway. i agree with the statement railway is a good for the future in our country, because most people go to there offices in every day early in the morning, due to triafic jame for small road and a lot of vehicle. so the train is very important in the country no more expenses same like the vehicle and train move more people to one place to another place easyle with out trafic jame its make strong economey of our countary.
introduction
, most
people
say that
government
spent there money on the railway.
i
agree
with the statement railway is a
good
for the future in our country,
because
most
people
go to there
offices
in every day
early in the morning, due to
triafic
jame
for
small
road and
a lot of vehicle
.
so
the train is
very
important
in the country no more expenses same like the vehicle and train
move
more
people
to one place to another place
easyle
with out
trafic
jame
its
make
strong
economey
of our
countary
.
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IELTS essay government spent there money on the railway

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
92 words
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