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People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.

People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion. 0G2l
Number of people believe that the high cost of fuel will help with the pollution problems on the contrary other believe that it is not. I am largely agreement with the high cost is a key of solving of the environmental problems. On one hand, the high cost of fuel will help to develop public transportation and build hospitals. Number of people used cars for their leisure time so when government increase the coast of the fuel they will gain a plethora of money helps to do transportation for people who has not cars. It also, helps to transfer the kids from their homes to school moreover the university students. Government can also has a part of this money to build hospital at the neighborhood which have not one. It will helps the people at this area. It also can help at repair the roads. For example, Egypt when raised the fuel and start doing a numerous of improvement at the roads. ON the other hand, People think that this money will be tiny and can not help with anything. They think if the fuel increase 5 dollar will is not help to this facilities and will be increasing only without any target. It will more for the car owner and no one will benefit from that. It will be losing only without any gain. In addition, they did not see any plan of improvement the roads, the hospitals and the transportation. If the government can publish this plan they will persuade of increasing helps with a variety things. To sum up, Lifting will do progress at a variety domain and can help with a number of things. All they need to have a perfect plan and to start doing it.
Number of
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people
believe that the high cost of
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fuel
will
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help
with the pollution problems
on the contrary
other believe that it is not. I am
largely
agreement with the high cost is a key of solving of the environmental problems.

On one hand, the high cost of
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fuel
will
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help
to develop public transportation and build hospitals. Number of
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people
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used
cars for their leisure time
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so
when
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government
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increase
the coast of the
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fuel
they will gain a plethora of money
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helps
to do transportation for
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people
who
Did you mean "have", "haven"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'people' should be used.
has
not cars. It
also
,
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helps
to transfer the kids from their homes to school
moreover
the university students.
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Government
can
also
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has
a part of this money to build hospital at the neighborhood which
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have not one
. It will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "help"
helps
the
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people
at this area. It
also
can
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help
at repair the roads.
For example
, Egypt when raised the
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fuel
and
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start
doing
The phrase 'a numerous of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'a' and 'of'.
a numerous of
improvement at the roads.

ON the other hand
,
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People
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think
that this money will be tiny and can not
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help
with anything. They
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think
if the
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fuel
increase 5 dollar will is not
Consider using a past participle here: "helped".
help
to
Did you mean "these"?
this
facilities and will be increasing
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only
without any target. It will more for the car owner and no one will benefit from that. It will be losing
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only
without any gain.
In addition
, they did not
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see
any plan of improvement the roads, the hospitals and the transportation.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
the
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government
can publish this plan they will persuade of increasing
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helps
with a variety things.

To sum up, Lifting will do progress at a variety domain and can
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help
with a number of things. All they need to have a perfect plan and to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
doing it.
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IELTS essay People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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