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People think that countries should produce foods that their population eats and import less food as much as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

Food is an essential source for all living beings. It is widely believed that all types of food materials should be cultivated in our nation by which the importing will be reduced. I admit that I will completely agree with the given statement. Firstly, all varieties of eating essentials should be grown in our nation. One of the main reasons why this view is held is that cost of the food materials will be dramatically decreased. Whereas, there will be no compromise in the quality, quantity, and taste. Moreover, the mixing of various chemicals and liquids will be minimized by which we can store food materials for a long period. As a result, we can start exporting food by which it can be help in rising our country economy. For example, while exporting various food materials Bangladesh is the country that is earning 12% of the total economy. Secondly, importing should be reduced so that, consequently it helps our farmers to produce all types of food materials. Whereas, it also develops our infrastructure. Money spent on importing can be utilized for something other developments by which we can raise our chin. According to the reports we are the country which spends almost 45% of our money for importing that can be stopped. For instance, Spain is only the country that does not encourage importing and love to support their developments. Therefore, persuaded by all discussion till now as well as driven by my personal experiences, I would say that production should be escalated by which we can start exporting, as a result, we can stop importing and earn money.

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Food
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food
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materials
 should be cultivated
 in our nation by which the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrevealpoint outexpresspinpointshowsuggest
importing
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reduced
. I admit that I will completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 statement.

Firstly
, all varieties of eating essentials should be grown
 in our nation. One of the main reasons why this view is held
 is that cost of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
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materials
 will be dramatically
 decreased. Whereas, there will be no compromise in the quality, quantity, and taste. Moreover
, the mixing of various chemicals and liquids will be minimized
 by which we can store You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
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materials
 for a long period. As a result
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 exporting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 by which it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in rising our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 economy. For example
, while exporting various You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
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materials
 Bangladesh is the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
that is
 earning 12% of the total economy.

Secondly
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importing
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reduced
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so
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helps
 our farmers to produce all types of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
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materials
. “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas
, it also
 develops our infrastructure. Money spent on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrevealpoint outexpresspinpointshowsuggest
importing
 can be utilized
 for something other developments by which we can raise our chin. According to the reports we are the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 which spends almost 45% of our money for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrevealpoint outexpresspinpointshowsuggest
importing
 that can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceaseddiscontinued
stopped
. For instance
, Spain is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 that does not encourage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrevealpoint outexpresspinpointshowsuggest
importing
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to support their developments.

Therefore
, persuaded by all discussion till This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
as well
 as driven by my personal experiences, I would say that production should be escalated
 by which we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 exporting, as a result
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
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importing
 and earn money. 