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People should experience travelling alone? Do you agree or disagree?

People should experience travelling alone? E7GyL
There is an opinion that People should experience travelling alone. I agree with that opinion because of the following reasons. First of al, it help to Improve your mental health. Being alone is good for the soul, and can even help you manage problems of depression, anxiety and stress. For those who work in high-pressure environments or anyone who needs a change of scene, a little alone time can be great for wellbeing. Next, it helps you Develop social skills. You’ll quickly learn how to start conversations and maintain friendships as a solo traveller. This will enhance your communication skills, and can be hugely beneficial for existing relationships with loved ones back home So, People should experience travelling alone.
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IELTS essay People should experience travelling alone?

Essay
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3 paragraphs
119 words
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