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People say it is the responsibility of the residents to keep the environment clean and tidy while others think it is the government's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion with examples. v.4

People say it is the responsibility of the residents to keep the environment clean and tidy while others think it is the government's responsibility. v. 4
Nowadays, maintaining and cleanliness of the environment is an important topic to discuss in the society. Some people argue that, it is the responsibility of the individuals to clean the surroundings and some others, argues that it is the whole responsibility of the government. In my opinion, it is a joint action and both are in the position of protecting the nature. This essay following the discussion of both arguments with appropriate examples. On the one hand, it has observed that the decay from the apartments is the main reason for the pollution. If the individuals try to segregate the garbage and put it into the separate waste bin, then it helped the authority to collect it effectively. Additionally, If the individuals put the garbage into the collecting point rather than throwing out the unused area. For example, in the Banglore, the apartment managements are instructed the owners to keep their garbage outside the home than throwing out. It had positive feedback and authority can able to see clean surroundings. On the other hand, it is effort of government to have a mechanism of disposing the litter and to initiate the awareness classes to the society about the negative impact of the pollution. Furthermore, the law agencies should put extra budget and time to clean region by building waste collection centre. It had positive feedback to protect the nature. For instance, in the Karela, the government had made a system for appointing unemployed ladies to collect and clean the surroundings. It actually helped the women to get the work and made a village tidy. In conclusion, in my opinion, it is the joint effort and both individuals and regional centres are responsible to protect the nature. The locals should in cooperate with the centre to take considerable action for cleanliness of the surroundings.
Nowadays, maintaining and cleanliness of the environment is an
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important
topic to discuss in the society.
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Some
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people
argue that, it is the responsibility of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individuals
to
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clean
the surroundings and
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some
others, argues that it is the whole responsibility of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
. In my opinion, it is a joint action and both are in the position of protecting the nature. This essay following the discussion of both arguments with appropriate examples.

On the one hand, it has observed that the decay from the apartments is the main reason for the pollution. If the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individuals
try to segregate the garbage and put it into the separate waste bin, then it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
the authority to collect it
effectively
.
Additionally
, If the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individuals
put the garbage into the collecting point
rather
than throwing out the unused area.
For example
, in the
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Banglore
, the apartment managements
are instructed
the owners to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
their garbage outside the home than throwing out. It had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
feedback and authority
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can able to
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see
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clean
surroundings.

On the other hand
, it is effort of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to have a mechanism of disposing the litter and to initiate the awareness classes to the society about the
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negative
impact of the pollution.
Furthermore
, the law agencies should put extra budget and time to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clean
region by building waste collection
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centre
. It had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
feedback to protect the nature.
For instance
, in the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Karela
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
had made a system for appointing unemployed ladies to collect and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clean
the surroundings. It actually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
the women to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the work and made a village tidy.

In conclusion
, in my opinion, it is the joint effort and both
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individuals
and regional
Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.
centres
are responsible to protect the nature. The locals should in cooperate with the
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
to take considerable action for cleanliness of the surroundings.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay People say it is the responsibility of the residents to keep the environment clean and tidy while others think it is the government's responsibility. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
303 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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