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People remember special gifts or presents that they receive. Why?

People remember special gifts or presents that they receive. Why? 3bBj5
Things that are given to us as a gifts or presents are usually remembered. I believe that human beings have an attitude of remembering something especially if those things are given to them by the person they love or dear to them and because of the feelings after they received those gifts. People received gifts by means of occasion such as Birthdays, Wedding, Thanksgiving and even Specific Holidays such as Christmas can be remembered not because it was expensive but because we put value to those things that the person who gave the gifts remembered us. Hence, we tend to easily recall those presents for the reason that we feel excited and happy by the time it was given to us. Meanwhile, as a human we always have the desires to get a gift regardless of any event this was because it has been embedded in our mind that if we received a present, we feel joy and love. Moreover, a good example to that was when someone gives us a present on Christmas day, we feel happy just by receiving things regardless of how big or small it was as long as the person who gave it was true to their feelings towards giving those things and that what makes it easy to be remembered because we feel special. Even kids given a candy as a gift towards being a good and smart at school they tend to experience happiness just by receiving those candies. Therefore, gifts or presents that was given to us can be remembered not because of the price of those things hence, it can remember because of the person who gave it that we put value on those and also the emotions that we felt the day it was given to us.
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and smart at school they tend to experience happiness
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by receiving those candies.

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IELTS essay People remember special gifts or presents that they receive. Why?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
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