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People read newspapers or watching news on TV

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These days using newspapers or watching news on TV is becoming controvercial topic in many socities. Due to the fact that both of them has some lack of content. That's why majority of people are not fond of newspapers. Admittedly, there are majority of newspapers, however their sale isn't so good enough according to some reasons. Firstly, the price of them is not reasonable which causes of diminishing the majority of consumers who want to buy them. In order to solve this problem their cost should be decreased than common. As a result the number ofpeople who are fun of newspapers would increase for that reason. Due to the fact nowadays majority of people don't interest social media which is printed one. Another solution would be to decorate newspapers with unique design to attract young people's attention eslecially adults and teenagers. Consequently, reading and using them would be higher than common. All things considered, there are many solutions to this problem. The more Solutions are put into action the better results will be in near future.
These days using
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newspapers
or watching news on TV is becoming
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controvercial
topic in
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socities
. Due to the fact that both of them has
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some
lack of content. That's why
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majority of
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people
are not fond of
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newspapers
.
Admittedly
, there are
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majority of
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newspapers
,
however
their sale isn't
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so
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good
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enough
according to
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some
reasons.
Firstly
, the price of them is not reasonable which causes of diminishing the
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majority
of consumers who want to
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buy
them. In order to solve this problem their cost should
be decreased
than common.
As a result
the number
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ofpeople
who are fun of
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newspapers
would increase for that reason. Due to the fact nowadays
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majority
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
don't interest social media which
is printed
one. Another solution would be to decorate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
with unique design to attract young
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's attention
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eslecially
adults and
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teenagers
.
Consequently
, reading and using them would be higher than common. All things considered, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
solutions to this problem. The more Solutions
are put
into action the better results will be in near future.
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IELTS essay People read newspapers or watching news on TV

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
176 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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